I found this particularly difficult as I had atrocious brain fog this year. A lot of distractions with my care agency handing my contract back to social services.
My first discernible thought is that the poem shows movement through time with seasonal references throughout.
“…happy as the grass was green”
A symbolic gesture towards spring, whereas later in the poem it nods towards the end of summer.
“…………………….., the hay
Fields high as a house,”
Ending with childless land and lamb white days, Thomas also reflects on the changing light through the seasons, from golden spring glow to white winter’s glare.
The imagery is vivid in this poem and it certainly brings images of farms and childhood. Of laughter and freedom. Lack of responsibility and growing. Using crops to symbolise the growing and maturing of a child into adulthood. The use of alliteration and consonance as poetic devices are apparent, even if Thomas’ lines are spread over many.
As to a rhythm there is one, its took me ages to find it.
Took me a whole evening to count the syllables in this poem to find a rhythm.
There’s a choppiness to the rhythm which I find reminds me of being easily distracted as a child. The meandering between activities, with school interjected between fun.
He also uses personification to add human qualities to the changing sun and seasons. I think this adds to the metaphors and enhances the symbolism of growth, time and life.
I get to a point where I’ve read it so many times with brain fog that it becomes a jumble of words.
The last two lines confuse me. They seem to be referring to some constraint, and I can only allude to meaning, maybe the responsibilities which comes with adulthood, and with age, mortality.
“Time held me green and dying,
Though I sang in my chains like the sea”